Greg and Selena

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Selena was writing up some pages about her design history for an RFP she’s trying to win. She asked me to edit it, and I ended up reworking major sections for her. She called me today saying she wasn’t going to use my changes because as she put it:

It didn’t sound like me. I don’t usually use big words, spelled incorrectly, like you do.

8 Comments

  1. 1
    On January 30, 2007 at 1:30 pm ANNA wrote:

    :P

  2. 2
    On January 30, 2007 at 8:29 pm Stef wrote:

    Good luck on that RFP!!!!

  3. 3
    On January 31, 2007 at 10:57 am Dancer in DC wrote:

    LOL! Indeed, it’s better to use more common words which you know you’re going to spell right.

  4. 4
    On February 1, 2007 at 6:33 am Joanna wrote:

    Selena,
    You could always use Mike for your editing.

  5. 5
    On February 1, 2007 at 10:18 am kitty wrote:

    Or me… though most of my experience has been tearing my hair out proofing Greg’s work : )

    What is an RFP? (Yeah, probly don’t want to use me then!)

    p.s. I used only a single space before my parenthetical- just for you!

  6. 6
    On February 1, 2007 at 10:42 am Gregory wrote:

    RFP = Request for Proposal, it’s common for freelance work for clients that have their act together.

  7. 7
    On February 1, 2007 at 10:42 am Gregory wrote:

    In my defense, I never masked that I was a good editor, especially when it comes to editing my own work.

    The one aspect of editing that I do well is reading from the perspective of the audience, and providing solutions that will maintain their interest and keep them reading.

  8. 8
    On February 1, 2007 at 3:40 pm kitty wrote:

    oh, okay- cool!

    Well, good luck, Selena : )

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